Tuesday, September 8, 2009

Elizabeth Crawford--Slam Poetry



This is a poem entitled “Pretty.” Katie Makkai performed this piece at the National Poetry Slam, a performance poetry competition where teams from across the country participate in a large-scale poetry slam. This piece is from the 2002 competition.

It is hard not to pay attention when someone begins a slam poem. Clearly it is different from just reciting or reading a poem out of a book. The feeling and raw emotion behind the words is what draws me to this art form; you can see from this clip that by the end of the piece the artist is almost crying with the depth of her emotion. The poets really feel the words they are saying, and that shows in their performances. In this particular piece, Makkai is expressing her detestation for the word “pretty” and questions society for making young women feel insecure about themselves. She recounts the story of her mother trying to “fix” her, as if how she was wasn’t enough, and vows that no daughter of hers will ever be considered “merely pretty,” because that word could not define everything she will be. The personal journey that Makkai relates to the listener really helps us to understand what is being expressed, as does the passion she uses to relay how important this subject is to her.

In my opinion, this slam poem is art because it is something that took the artist time, skill, and effort to produce. It makes the audience think hard about the subject and presents it in an accessible way, which, to me, is a characteristic of art. The theory from the Quartet of Traditions that best describes this piece is the Emotionalist theory because it explores psychological experiences and feelings. The name of this theory says it all: this piece is about expressing emotion.

The ancestors of this work of art date back to the time humans first started communicating. Oral traditions and storytelling are similar to slam poetry because in order to tell a good story it must be able to grab the listener and hold their attention. To do this it must be filled with emotion so that it is relatable to the audience. Every culture has a history of oral traditions, but one that stands out to me is African traditions. According to Central Oregon Community College, “traditionally, Africans have revered good stories and storytellers, as have most past and present peoples around the world who are rooted in oral cultures and traditions. Ancient writing traditions do exist on the African continent, but most Africans today, as in the past, are primarily oral peoples, and their art forms are oral rather than literary.” The stories of African cultures are often performed alongside songs or dances, incorporating the performance aspect of slam poetry. Another form of art that could be considered to share DNA with slam poetry is the bards and troubadours of medieval times. Though, according to the University of Idaho, the stories of the bards and troubadours were performed in the form of songs, the element of orally and emotionally recounting events is still present, especially since a song can be considered a type of poem.

I hope you enjoyed this video as much as I did! Have I opened your eyes to a new form of art and expression that you didn’t know about before?


Sources:

Makkai, Kate. “Pretty.” 2002. Online video clip. YouTube. Accessed on 8 September 2009 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M6wJl37N9C0.

Agatucci, Cora. "African Storytelling." Central Oregon Community College, 2008. Web. 8 Sept. 2009. http://web.cocc.edu/cagatucci/classes/hum211/afrstory.htm.

"Bards, Music, and Arthurian Legend." University of Idaho, 13 Apr. 1997. Web. 8 Sept. 2009. .

8 comments:

  1. Liz: This performer was clearly referencing Doris Day's song (she was a famous 1950's singer and considered a "wholesome American beauty"): Here's the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xZbKHDPPrrc
    Hope that helps give some cultural perspective!

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  2. Hi Liz, I thought this poetry slam was really moving. I loved how the artist got so into her artwork. For some reason, this really reminds me of the little girls who's mothers force them into beauty pageants. There was a show on TLC about the pageants and how much effort the mothers put into making their daughters "perfect". I think its sad that America puts "beauty" on a pedestal forcing women young and old to have insecurities.

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  3. Hey Liz,
    When I watched this video the night before class, I was like what just happened. Its so true about the things that are going on in our society. We are wanting to change our bodies so much just to impress people. This person really made me think about this world around us and think about how women are portrayed. The link that Kelly Thomas wrote on the comment shows the exact same thing. The women are in control of cooking and making the bed and making an idealistic world. The world should not be separated like that and this was very moving to see. The woman's emotion shocked me with her sharp words and the phrase about being "unsuitably Fuckable"made me laugh. Thanks for putting up such a great example :)

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  4. Hey Liz,

    I really liked this poetry, because I could easily relate to and agree with the idea that there is so much more to strive for in life than simply being "pretty."

    The expectations women set for themselves today is astonishing. The amount of effort we contribute to our everyday morning routine ALONE is crazy. The measures some women take just to look what they consider to be "presentable" is ridiculous. Dying hair, shaving legs, wearing fake hair, fake nails, fake eyelashes, high heels... it's almost overwhelming what lengths some women take just to be remotely satisfied and comfortable with themselves.

    I also liked how she explained how even though we go through all of this nonsense to be satisfied with our outward appearances... one sleazy guy at a bar car melt all that hard-earned self-confidence in mere seconds.

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  5. Hey Liz,
    I had the chance to view your post the night before we watched it in class and it was spectacular. I haven't really had the chance to experience slam poetry before, and I thought that this piece was a great first piece of slam poetry to experience. I really like how there is so much emotion behind all of the words that the artist speaks. This made me pay closer attention to what she was actually talking about because you could almost feel here emotion just in the way that she was talking to her audience. I also really liked what she was saying, and how no daughter of hers will ever be defined as "merely pretty". There are so many things in this world that people call "just pretty", but putting more meaning behind the word, I think is a much better way to describe someone or something. I know in this particular video she is talking about how women set high standards for themselves and they way they look. There are many other things that people refer to as "just pretty", and i think that if more meaning is put behind the word, it will make the word much more enjoyable.

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  6. Liz,
    This was an excellent choice of art to share with the class. It brought up a lot of discussion and emotion with the class. Have you ever heard of Jean Kilbourne? She does a lot of great work with the media, specifically how it affects the generation following it. She has a lecture, book, and documentary called Can't Buy My Love, which has to do with body image. I'm sure you'd love it.

    Also, I'd like to point out that I've never heard slam poetry before, so it was a great first experience. Thanks for sharing it with us.

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  7. Liz,

    I really enjoyed this blog! I thought it was so unique and really great that you chose a clip of slam poetry. It was refreshing to see some different art, rather than a painting or sculpture.
    I had never before seen slam poetry, and I was glad to have the experience to see some.
    I think it was so powerful, and I'm jealous that you found something so great to show us. The way she expressed her words and used gestures and facial expressions was so clever, and it was much better than if she was to just read the poem.
    Never before had I really thought about the use of the word 'pretty', and the ways in which young girls strive to be pretty because that is what they hear they should do. But this clip gave a lot of insight to that, and I thank you for showing it to the class.

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  8. Is there a transcript of this? Some of my friends are on dial up and can't watch this

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